Day: April 15, 2016

Above is a concept for Ollies parents (with Ollie for size comparison) – a sub plot which I decided to remove from the final story. I decided to make them visually different to make it more interesting for the reader however, give them similarities to make it obvious they are his parents. For example, Ollie has his mum’s head dress and chest pattern, while he has his father’s eyes.

I ultimately decided to remove the sub plot as it would require too much time to work on – I would rather have a shorter story that was more finished than a longer one with more mistakes in. However, that did not mean I would remove them completely from the story – they can still be seen having an argument during Ollie’s good trip.

Below is the first concept design of the main character that I chose to run with – Ollie Owl.

There have been a few – though not many – changes to his final design since this concept. For example, I got rid of the textures, as I felt they made him look a bit off as well as making the software I was using lag when doing simple actions such as moving him or copying and pasting him. Due to issues with the colouring, I also changed the colour of his beak and head dress so that they would match and seem to blend in with each other.

This is the final design I came up with for Ollie. I have added wings to him, however, he will have the same stance as the first design when they are tucked away. I also added feet, which will be visible when the wings are tucked away too. I gave Ollie a slight green tinge over all as I wanted him to look unique and exotic – a style that quite literally matches his eyes.

I decided to come up with a main character before the story, as I thought that the design of the character would help me decide what kind of story I would write. I knew I wanted the story to have some sort of dark plot, but I didn’t know where to start. Below are some of the designs of character I came up with in the very early stages.

This character design is called Red and was made for a story I ended up calling “Red Is Hungry” – a story where Red would go around looking for food and eventually dies of starvation as no one would give him any as he often stole from them in the past.

This design almost became the one I settled with, I even when as far as to come up with a title design. It follows Robo – an odd robot made from fabric – as he went around his communist capital and learned about his “glorious” state of Varster, oblivious to all the cruelty and hardships that were actually going on around him. I even ended up doing concepts for two more characters (below), which may have been thugs that could attempt to mug him.